Tuesday, August 18, 2020

The Great Awapuni School Fun Run

I found it hard to... seperate my writing into paragraphs.

I found it easy to... swap the boring words in my story to rich words.

Next time I will... Sit by myself to finish my work on time.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 18, 2020 at 3:23 PM

    Hello Joelle,
    I quite like your recount about the fun run, I like it because it gets to the point quickly.
    I think it sounds a bit funny when your head gets stuck in the net.
    I dont know what you could do better next time?

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