What Makes A Quality Recount

My buddy Maddy and I discussed 10 important ways to make our writing better and more interesting.

Here are the 10 things we brainstormed together...

• In your introduction it is important to answer the five w's who, what, where, when and why.
• Include your senses; See, Smell, Hear, Feel and Touch.
• Separate your brainstorming into different sections based on the topic of each paragraph.
• Make sure your recount is in the right order. 
• Maybe add a 1. 2. 3. planning so you remember what order your recount goes in.
• Add rich language.
• Make sure to incorporate feeling and emotion into your closing statement.
• Try use time connectives.
• Make sure to use correct punctuation.
• Use nouns.

My goal for this term is to use more scientific words, use rich language and not make my writing so long and to make it shorter with strong words.

Is The Environment Our Responsibility

I found it easy to transfer my writing to the slides and come up with ways to draw the reader in. Something that helped me with drawing the reader in was finding images to make secret messages.

I found it hard to find the information to actually write my persuasive writing and to publish the information into my own words. 

Next time I will try and put the information into my on words and finish my work faster.

The Great Awapuni School Fun Run

I found it hard to... seperate my writing into paragraphs.

I found it easy to... swap the boring words in my story to rich words.

Next time I will... Sit by myself to finish my work on time.

My favourite time of day

I found it hard to?... Use rich describing words to write about my favourite time of day.  

I found it easy to?... Find the images that really suited my writing.

Next time I will?... Work by myself so I get my work done I the time given.

 

Matariki

We were learning about...  how to write A report.

 I found it easy to... put the words in the the slides from my report.

 I found it challenging to ... finish on time.

Next time I will... not talk when doing my work so I can finish on time.

my mythical creature

We were learning about copy and pasting and howto do screenastify.

I found it easy to

I found it hard to copy and paste.

I really enjoyed

Next time I need to work faster and keep up with the instructions.

should children wear school uniforms

Should children wear school uniforms I certainly agree that children should wear school uniforms. 1.easy for public to recognize 2.kids get bullied for mufti clothes 3.good for sports events Initially if you were coming home from school and there was an accident that had happened in town somewhere and the community had spotted what had happened they would immediately know what to do or who to call because you were wearing your school uniform. Another point is if your school were to let you where whatever you want to school as in your school had no uniforms you have a possible chance of getting bullied of what you where because the school that you got o does not have uniforms to give you. Many believe that if you had gone out to an event with your fellow school members and you were not in a uniform because your school does not require it and your event involves you to run around and at the end of your long day your teacher or caregiver is trying to find you it would be a lot easier if you were wearing your uniform. This is why it thing that kids should wear uniforms and I hope I have changed your opinion.

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